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When people write a persuasive or an expository essay, it is mandatory to have a thesis statement. A persuasive essay is when people make a opinion on a topic and try to convince and change other people’s minds. A expository essay is an essay that goes in depth into analyzing a topic.  A thesis statement is a sentence that is put at the end of the introductory paragraph and states the main points of the argument or the topic of the essay.  It provides limits to the scope of the paper.

 

The pattern of thesis statement is:

 

1.What do you want to write about?

Example:  Seeing a real dinosaur.

 

2.What is your opinion of the topic?

 

Example: It would be very interesting and cool to see a real dinosaur.

 

3.What is the main reason supporting your opinion?

 

Example: Dinosaurs have many different abilities compared to human beings.

 

4.What is another reason supporting your opinion?

 

Example: Dinosaurs are extinct now, so no one can see one anymore.

 

5.What is another reason supporting your opinion?

 

Example: They have fascinating physical features.

 

Then, you add these answers up: Therefore/Thus, 2 because 3,4 and 5

 

Therefore, it would be very interesting and cool to see a real dinosaur because dinosaurs have many different abilities compared to human beings, dinosaurs are extinct now, so no one can see one anymore, and they have fascinating physical features.

 

After the thesis statement, write the body paragraphs according to the reasons supporting your opinion in the thesis.  Your body paragraphs should follow the same order as they are listed in your thesis.

 

This formula makes writing a thesis for a persuasive or expository essay much easier.  For more help with essay writing or essay editing, find a tutor with Think Out Here.

 

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English 101: Homophones: Two, Too, and To

by Diana Lum on June 9, 2013

images-1Think Out Here’s student, Brianna Mei, has provided a quick lesson on how to use “two, too, and to”.  Most of the time, people have the most issues with “too and to”.  People misuse “too” all the time.

Take a look at Brianna’s lesson and take the quiz!

 

These three word are very easy to get confused by. These three words have different meanings that are very important the remember.

 

What Is The Difference Between These Three Words

 

 

TOO is an adverb. It means

 

 

Example: I’m too tired to get out of bed.

 

TWO is a noun. It comes in second of the numbers: one, two, three, four…

 

 

Example: I have two puppies, one cat, and three birds.

 

 

TO is a preposition. It means to express motion or direction toward a person, place, point, or thing approached and reached.

 

Example: I went to my friend’s house for a sleepover.

 

How To Use These Three Words

 

 

People use Too when…

 

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Example: I’m don’t want to do my homework because I’m very lazy.

Changed to: I’m too lazy to do my homework.

 

 

People use Two when…

 

- talking about the number after one.

 

Example: My cousin is going to be two years old in June.

 

 

 

 

 

People use To when…

 

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Example: I walk to school every weekday.

 

 

 

In all, these three words sound much alike, but their meaning are not even close to being the same. Therefore, always be aware of which word to put in because putting the wrong word makes the sentence very akward.

 

Quick Quiz

1. I am __________ energetic to have my nap.

2. Since my sister and I are twins when I turn __________, my sister will turn ____________ ____________.

3. You are ____________ young to go into the deep-end.

4. For this year’s birthday party, I want ___________ go swimming and invite all my friends!

5. Can I learn how ________ ski, mom?

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English 101: Sentence Types Part 2

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April 12, 2013

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