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When people write a persuasive or an expository essay, it is mandatory to have a thesis statement. A persuasive essay is when people make a opinion on a topic and try to convince and change other people’s minds. A expository essay is an essay that goes in depth into analyzing a topic.  A thesis statement is a sentence that is put at the end of the introductory paragraph and states the main points of the argument or the topic of the essay.  It provides limits to the scope of the paper.

 

The pattern of thesis statement is:

 

1.What do you want to write about?

Example:  Seeing a real dinosaur.

 

2.What is your opinion of the topic?

 

Example: It would be very interesting and cool to see a real dinosaur.

 

3.What is the main reason supporting your opinion?

 

Example: Dinosaurs have many different abilities compared to human beings.

 

4.What is another reason supporting your opinion?

 

Example: Dinosaurs are extinct now, so no one can see one anymore.

 

5.What is another reason supporting your opinion?

 

Example: They have fascinating physical features.

 

Then, you add these answers up: Therefore/Thus, 2 because 3,4 and 5

 

Therefore, it would be very interesting and cool to see a real dinosaur because dinosaurs have many different abilities compared to human beings, dinosaurs are extinct now, so no one can see one anymore, and they have fascinating physical features.

 

After the thesis statement, write the body paragraphs according to the reasons supporting your opinion in the thesis.  Your body paragraphs should follow the same order as they are listed in your thesis.

 

This formula makes writing a thesis for a persuasive or expository essay much easier.  For more help with essay writing or essay editing, find a tutor with Think Out Here.

 

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Many think that Little Flower Academy (LFA) is a scary, academically-driven school with terrifying nuns that hunt down girls from wearing makeup and short kilts.  However, it is nothing like that at all.  LFA is a very normal school; there are high expectations, but that is what makes the school great.  The only exception from a public school is that it is all-girls and girls need to wear uniforms.

Grade 8 is not easy to survive.  For a girl new to high school, many problems, such as teachers, homework, projects, and peers, can be hard to manage.  However, being aware of the academic expectations, the policies and rules, and the daily life, helps when trying to survive grade 8 at LFA.  Here are a few tips to keep in mind.

Category A: Academics

1) Lined Paper: Even though it seems obvious to have your own lined paper, it is important to have enough.  It seems like we go through whole trees in each class.  Keep a good supply, and you’ll be in good shape.

2) French: Many students declare their hatred for French.  Do not worry.  If you study and pay attention in class, it will be fine.  Rien set impossible, non?  The French tests are not that difficult.  They are mostly in multiple choice format.

3) Tests:  We get a lot of tests; probably every week or two.  At times, it can be three subject tests in one day. The majority of the tests/quizzes come from social studies.

4) Social Studies: Many students consider socials a “deadly” subject.  You will need to memorize a lot of facts and dates.  Teachers like to give out a lot of quizzes that do not count for a lot of marks, but they are good practice for exams.  Teachers also give out assignments and paragraphs to write.  Be prepared for a lot of work!

5) Projects: Most of the projects are from Socials class. The teacher gives you a very short amount of time for each assignment.

 

Category B: Policies and Rules

1) Uniforms: Many girls get in the habit of rolling up their skirts to make “mini-kilts”.  Our school allows girls to roll it up once only, and shirts can only have the top two buttons undone!

2) Honour Roll/Distinction: To get on Honour Roll, you need an average of 86% and above.  To get on Distinction, you average needs to be 80-85%.

3) Rules: School starts at 8:17am, and Homeroom starts at 8:20.  Do not be late.  If you are, you will need a late slip from the office, and it goes on your report card.  It does not look good.

 

Category C: Socializing

1) Contact with Other Schools: LFA participates in many sports events that involve other schools.  Most of them are Catholic schools, such as Notre Dame, St. John Brebeuf, St. Thomas Aquinas, and St. Thomas Moore.  This year, we hosted the provincial volleyball championships, so we interacted with various schools in BC.

2) Brother School: Vancouver College (VC), an all-boys Catholic school in Vancouver, is the brother school of LFA.  At the beginning of the year, we invited the VC boys over for an Internet Safety seminar.  Moreover, our LFA proms include the VC boys.

 

Now that you know a little bit more about LFA, you do not have to worry about grade 8.  You can just concentrate on working hard, making friends, and trying out new clubs and activities!

 

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School’s Out for Summer!!

June 28, 2013

Congratulations to all of our elementary school and high school students in Burnaby, Vancouver, and Coquitlam who have completed another successful school year!. Thank you for all of your hard work and dedication! Another thanks goes out to our hard working tutors and their endless belief.  Think Out Here  would be nothing without them. As [...]

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How To Survive Grade 8 (from a student at Prince of Wales Secondary School in Vancouver)

June 24, 2013

Grade 8 is a very important year. It is when people get a fresh start in a new environment and meet different people. However, a new school usually means one does not have a lot of friends. Here are 3 very important skills to remember that will help one survive grade 8. 1) Get out [...]

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Think Out Here is looking for a French and Spanish Tutor in Vancouver

June 21, 2013

Think Out Here is looking to hire new language instructors for our French and Spanish students in Vancouver. We are looking for enthusiastic individuals who are ready to share their knowledge of French and Spanish with our students. Applicants should also be fluent in English. We are looking for people who can not only teach [...]

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Happy Father’s Day from Think Out Here

June 16, 2013

Think Out Here wants to wish all of the dads out there a very Happy Father’s Day! Through all of the years I’ve been tutoring, I have seen some very awesome dads.  These men are role models who lead by example every day.  They work hard to support their families and spend time supporting them.  They [...]

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Think Out Here Thanks You for All Your Loyalty

June 15, 2013

It is the end of the school year, and Think Out Here  would like to thank all of its students and their parents for all of their loyalty.  We have had a year full of successes great and small.  We are excited to tutor through the summer and prepare our students for the new school year! [...]

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English 101: Homophones: Two, Too, and To

June 9, 2013

Think Out Here’s student, Brianna Mei, has provided a quick lesson on how to use “two, too, and to”.  Most of the time, people have the most issues with “too and to”.  People misuse “too” all the time. Take a look at Brianna’s lesson and take the quiz!   These three word are very easy to [...]

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Reasons to Continue Tutoring Throughout the Summer

June 6, 2013

By the time June rolls around, students have already hit vacation mode; however, this is the worst time to take a break! Exams are just around the corner and it is crunch time!  Students need more focus now than ever. Now, after exams are done “summer vacation” truly does start.  Kids head to summer camp, [...]

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English 101: Transition Words

May 31, 2013

Transition words are great for smoothing out and connecting sentences together. Transition words are not only used at the beginning of sentences but could be used anywhere in a sentence. They are great for showing relativity between one point to the next, and they improve the connections between thoughts. Transition words connect two sentences together [...]

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